Tuesday, March 2, 2010


Give me feed back plzzzzz, befor thurs so i can make the changes lol!

1 comment:

  1. Okay, the short and dirty of it:
    I like your tilted horizon, but why the huge empty space on the right? It's not being utilized, and everything feels offbalance. Shift your composition over to fill the space. Your title should be about twice the size it is now, and fill up almost the top third of the composition. Your heroine is looking left, which is awkward, particularly so close to the spine. Experiment with flipping everything, see what happens.
    Her boot sits right in the corner, which is a little odd, feels like she's going to trip over the edge of the book. Either make her foot more visible, or crop it closer to avoid weird line-of-sight expectations.
    Why not overlap her shoulder with the rock wall? It would make her pop forward more, and increase the sense of action.
    And finally, tilt everything by another five or ten degrees. If you're going to do something, don't do it halfway. =)

    All that said, good work, you're almost there.

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